Law Writing Guide
Law Sample Personal Statement
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As I stepped up to the platform to complete the cross-examination, a softball-sized knot took shape in my stomach. I prayed that my vocal cords would not fail me. As I prepared to question the prosecution's key witness, I knew that my performance would decide whether my team left the courtroom with the smiles of victors, or the furrowed brows of the defeated. The opposing barrister and his team looked hostile, as I began my interrogation, but this made me more determined to win.
With the weight of the team resting directly on my shoulders, I began to question the witness, and realised that my questioning was tearing holes in the witness' story. My nervousness faded away and confidence took its place. After I asked my last question, I sat down, relieved and jubilant, but presenting a calm exterior; if I had openly expressed the full extent of my joy, security might have thrown me out of the courtroom.
I had just presented a case in front of a fictitious County Court Judge as part of my college's pilot 'Law-In-Practice Programme.' As a student in the college's A-level law course, I had expected to take part in this activity,to explore a possible career, and enhance useful skills such as public speaking. My teachers, and family and friends had always insisted that I would make an excellent solicitor because of my skill at convincing others through logical and persuasive argumentation. Before the programme,however, I had limited practical exposure to the field, having only worked as a court clerk for only a few hours.
I left that day, armed with a victory, but also with a career plan and substantive knowledge of the law. Through participating in cases such as this one, I now understand much more about the components of a trial, from the basic proceedings, to the strategies used by barristers, to the diverse opinions expressed by judges. I saw just how much hard work it requires to successfully try cases; I often met with my coaches and teammates on nights and weekends to work on our case strategies.
My efforts paid off. At the end of the year, our team performed well and I ended up winning an "Outstanding Student Award." More importantly than the award however, was the realisation that I had now decided that my future career would be in a courtroom, with real-life cases.
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